viernes, 5 de diciembre de 2014

Essay.

        Children’s behaviour is sometimes manipulated by some videogames and this is a fact. Nowadays young people prefer to stay at home playing these games before than going out with another children, prefering then the virtual world. For instance, my little brother spend a many hours a day in front of a screen playing online with his friends or simply watching TV.

       In the first place, we can find many types of videogames because of there are a big range of them. Althoug many games have bad values that influence people, there are also others with good values which could change their minds in a positive way. Therefore, the aim of several videogames is to teach, and they often develop brain’s activity of children. Then, this is a good method to develop children skills at the same time they are enjoying.

       Moreover, there are videogames whose aim is not to teach, and they only are useful to entertain. Many people think that they are a waste of time because they don’t apport us anything, and playing games isn’t a productive activity. However, I personally believe they are a good way to turn off our minds and enjoy. Nevertheless, everything in excess is bad, and young people sometimes spend enugh time with bad videogames and later they are confused in real world.

       In addition, there are also videogames that increase violence between children, such as “Call of duty” or “Assassin’s Creed”. It happens due to the fact that nowadays many children only have games about wars, blood or fights. Scientifics ensure it is a children’s problem because they are too immature, but honestly, I think it is a parent’s problem, they have the responsibility to control the content of these games and they have to try give their children the best education they can do.

       In conclusion, a good solution could be that parents establish higher standards to their children, and videogames which increase violece must be forbbiden. Young people have to realize the real world is more important than the virtual world. Our freedom doesn’t have limits, we put them.

1 comentario:

  1. Interesting article.

    *other children
    *because there is a wide range of them (because of + noun clause)
    *children's brain activity
    *they don't provide anything ("apport" is Spanish!)
    *young people spend too much time with bad videogames

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